This week we received our marks and feedback from our initial presentation. Overall I received a high mark that was one mark off a first.
I received 2.1 marks (60-70) in the following section:
Feedback
Good use of images to tell the story and a common theme to show the project selection area. The presentation was very good and well structured and shows a good consideration of the research conducted so far. The delivery displayed a sound understanding of the subject area but there is an are to exploit in other conditions with similar needs.
Areas to Address
Work on your aims and objectives so that the objectives are specific to your aims. Consider the subject as a whole, and focus to the scale, so that there is a clear route to progress.
In relation to this feedback:
I received 2.1 marks (60-70) in the following section:
- Identification and communication of an appropriate Design/Engineering subject to a high standard
- Report Aims and Objectives have been defined and defined to a high standard
- Presentation structure, Organisation, content and presentation to an outstanding standard
- Time planning of the Report stages to be addressed have been completed to an outstanding standard
- Depth and breadth of research and referencing to an outstanding standard
Feedback
Good use of images to tell the story and a common theme to show the project selection area. The presentation was very good and well structured and shows a good consideration of the research conducted so far. The delivery displayed a sound understanding of the subject area but there is an are to exploit in other conditions with similar needs.
Areas to Address
Work on your aims and objectives so that the objectives are specific to your aims. Consider the subject as a whole, and focus to the scale, so that there is a clear route to progress.
In relation to this feedback:
- I will re-do my aims and objectives so that each aim matches an objective.
- I will also add to or adjust any objectives if I need to.
- I will continue looking at the subject as a whole - all aspects of the autism spectrum.